Hi Samuel. I enjoyed reading your recount of your four kilometer walk. I'm pleased you remembered we write for an audience. It was a very entertaining read, because you included lots of details. Perhaps in your next piece of writing you could use capital letters to place names, like Norman's Hill Road and Manukau Harbour. Thanks for sharing!
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Hi Samuel. I enjoyed reading your recount of your four kilometer walk. I'm pleased you remembered we write for an audience. It was a very entertaining read, because you included lots of details. Perhaps in your next piece of writing you could use capital letters to place names, like Norman's Hill Road and Manukau Harbour. Thanks for sharing!
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ReplyDeleteWow sounds very fun! Did you see the library and community centre?